a sampled universe

rules for poets, donkeys & others 4

there should be no commas between the last subject,

& the verb as funicular indecision or patametaphysical

hypotenuse, ringing out the bells,

ringing in the crushed houses ....

switching from you to they to one

can be very confusing   for a reader

lashing out at congealed moments made out of emotional wicker,

burning

right there the middle of a pointless desert;

uh, no desert has points

or maybe except sharpness of tone to frizzle away

linkages without sausages;

it is also acceptable to either repeat the preposition

or blow up a gov’t building,

fascination has nearness like odd lights

falling into a well ....

everything they tell ya on the right-wing

talk shows,  excuse me,  on the news

is reduced down from the short & ordinary words

& so i think you can put that

in yr pipe(line)

& sluice it

slice it

dice it w.out abolishing

bone chance or any other

formulaic

flinch—

or